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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Fleet Support Service (June 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dreamy Jazz were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hello. Thanks for your translation of Service de soutien de la flotte from the French Wikipedia. Currently this translation includes no references / sources, and the translation reads somewhat promotionally.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 13:16, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Mike.Dkr! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 13:16, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, Mike.Dkr. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about in the page Draft:The Fleet Support Service, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization or competitors;
propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the {{request edit}} template);
disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI);
avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:Spam);
do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 15:17, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Dreamy Jazz:, I copy/paste the paid mention that you advised me on my talk page. Is that good ? Moreover, I'm not paid for that unique purpose but for my internship, missions which include writing translations on wikipedia. Thank you for your help,

Best regards

Hello. The disclosure on your userpage is good. Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 08:33, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Also, when you think the draft is ready for a re-review you can press the resubmit button in the box on the draft. At this point you need to find more sources which define notability and ensure that the draft is neutrally written before you resubmit, as the draft will be declined again without these things being done. Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 08:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Dreamy Jazz: thank you for your anwser. I could have those informations, BUT it's all in French ... so I do not know if it could help you to approve my draft. What do you think ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mike.Dkr (talk • contribs)

French language sources can be used to support information in the draft and can be used to define notability. Adding these sources to the draft will help.

Also when commenting on a talk page, you should sign your posts by placing ~~~~ after your comment. This places your username and when you commented after your post and also allows the {{ping}} template to work. Dreamy Jazz ^{talk to me | my contributions} 09:52, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:The Fleet Support Service

Hello, Mike.Dkr. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The Fleet Support Service".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 00:21, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]