User talk:Mieulon
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[edit]Hello, Mieulon, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]The information and sources that is obtained is great because this article needs a lot of work. The information will be very helpful to the page and make people more aware about the information. Especially since there is so much to do with the page, I thinking that it would be watched by many people because of how little to no information on the page. There is a lot you can do with this page. The neutral tone of the draft works well. I think the early life needs more information because not many people may know about Kajima Seibei so I think informing them with more than what you have might increase the effectiveness of the section unless that's all the information that is give about him than it will be fine. For the sidebar with his name, you should add his picture within it and list out a bio of him within it.
Make sure to check the sources because one of them wouldn't let me access the file or the file is missing on the page.Hutchidd (talk) 17:54, 29 October 2018 (UTC)