User talk:Michelledavison/Piracy in the Atlantic World
Can we please revise the 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence under the first heading. It sounds akward and inaccurate. Maybe switch it with "such as" or something to that effect. The way it is stated appears to me to casts the totality of trade routes to be the "middle passage" when in fact they are not. Sorry, I don't mean to offend anyone or step on any toes. Just a thought.
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