User talk:MichelleBir./sandbox

Review

MichelleBir., good start! I made a bunch of tweaks (you can see in history). Another suggestion would be to be consistent about how many regions/cities Transit is in between lede and later. -Reagle (talk) 17:13, 9 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

MichelleBir. Hey Michelle, this looks really nice so far. It's super organized and for the amount of information and formatting that you have, you did a great job. The only thing that sticks out to me glaringly is the 'cons' section. I don't really know what you mean by this and would adjust the title of the section or add more material to this to clarify. Otherwise looks awesome! Emsandell (talk) 20:41, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi MichelleBir.! I think that this is very good so far. My only notes would be to be careful about tone, as it's easy for business related articles to come across as unintentionally promotional. I think it's because so many of the sources out there may use promotional language, particularly primary sources. Reviewing the articles on similar topics can be helpful here. In any case, other than that just avoid hotlinking in the body of the article. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:04, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much! User:Shalor (Wiki Ed) -MichelleBir. (talk) 22:06, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]