User talk:Mgiulia3/sandbox

How's the draft coming along? Feel free to drop me a line if you'd like me to review what you've got so far. AdamCF87 (talk) 14:47, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I've been assigned to peer review your draft article. Overall, everything looks nicely organized and the contents remain neutral. All of your sections seem to have a similar amount of content except for your History section, maybe look for more information on the background origins and specific dates if you can find them? Also, one of your paragraphs, the the CaMPARI section, was missing a citation. Soh83 (talk) 17:15, 30 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]