User talk:Melmore1996/sandbox

Michael: Very good start to the article. A few suggestions for revisions: In your section "rise of the guerilla groups," you write more about the state than the guerrilla groups. Can you explain a bit more what was the context in which guerrilla movements emerged in Guerrero? Do you have specific information about these groups--their leadership, their goals, specific moments of confrontation with the governmnet? some of this is covered in the article that you are adding to, but right now, your contribution feels a bit distant in its style. Adding more specific details in a targeted way can help overcome this feeling. -Hyperlinks: can you link this to other articles? -Will you follow up with a conclusion? Does the dirty war come to an end? Legacies today, etc? -Citations: you need to support your writing with more citations throughout.Cz17 (talk) 20:20, 4 November 2017 (UTC)