User talk:Melissabond/sandbox

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Melissa Bond (talk) 02:44, 18 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review by Mayra Gomez

Second paragraph: It would be helpful to provide some rationale as to why these two types of internet intervention are the ones being used as telemental health interventions.

Third paragraph: Does “Coming Home and Moving Forward” intervention focus on co-occurring issues of PTSD and substance abuse or Physical health? This section needs further clarification and more detailed explanation as to why this treatment is unique and reasons why it may be attracting the veteran/military community.

Fourth paragraph: I believe the first sentence in this paragraph could use a citation to support the sentence.

Overall, this is a very interesting and relevant topic.

Peer Review: Danni Goodmann

In the 3rd paragraph:

change "excessive amounts of substances" to "substance use disorder" or " substance abuse"; if this is not in line with the reseach them keep what you have -- I just thought it would help with clarity/scientific language
VETS is in all caps, it an acronym? If so, explain what it stands for

In 4th paragraph:

clarify "war in Iraq" -- which war/mission, or link to wiki page of war you are referncing
Change "a year out" to a year post-study / post-intervention
Overall:
You discuss a lot of individual studies really well. I enjoy this but I know it's not really in line with Wikipedia style. Maybe try discussing the information more generally.
Some of the sentence structure is a bit repetative, especially in the first couple paragraphs
I think you guys have really good content and have a variety of good sources. Writing style is clear and easy to understand. I look forward to reading more soon!