User talk:Mei0908/sandbox

The article does very well with describing the dangers of cyberbullying and the uprising cyberbullying occurring in China. The subject of cyberbullying was described in a clear way and with the data included it was very helpful to understand how much cyberbullying in China has been rising. I don't have anything to say as far as improving the article. I feel it does a very good job at describing what cyberbullying is and the dangers of it and also the data that cyberbullying in China has been rising. Meghanpilski (talk) 17:46, 15 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The article is very good. But, at the beginning you describe cyber bullying which I think is unnecessary because the wikipedia article probably does a good job at explaining it in the beginning. I liked the use of statistics, they make a very clear point. You only used 2 references though, I think you should do more research so you can find additional information. The section is still pretty short, I think more information would do it justice. Overall, very good information so far. MelanieChristy (talk) 15:28, 29 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think this looks good. Ctysick (talk) 16:36, 29 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]