User talk:Mchang47/sandbox
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I think you just copied and pasted the existing wikipedia article for Mary Garrett into your sandbox. I'm not sure if you and Ting Ting are both working in Ting Ting's sandbox, but from Ting Ting's sandbox it looks like the only improvement would be to add more pictures and citations to your article. The sections of the article look well developed and organized. I think the both of you are on the right path! Vchan10 (talk) 13:36, 5 April 2017 (UTC)