User talk:Mburnsy

This user is a student editor in University_of_Guelph/Pet_Nutrition_(Fall) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:59, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Please see my reply at User_talk:Hannahjayg#Reply. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:52, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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What page you intend to add your work to? I assume you're talking about this page? User:Mburnsy/sandbox Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:44, 4 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Section headers should never be bolded, and should not be capitalized (beyond the first letter and any proper nouns)
There are a lot of citation errors (all the red messages at the bottom of the page). You need to fix these. You should have used the cite tool to create them from DOIs, PubMed IDs or ISBNs. Doing that is probably the easiest way to fix these errors.
You can't add the same information to multiple pages. Articles should not duplicate information present on other pages. General information would go on the cat or cat food page, and you should link to it from the other pages.
Just describe what reliable sources say about the topic. Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to talk to the reader

Fatty acids are an important part of your cats diet, as there are some that are essential in their diet, these are known as essential fatty acids

If you find yourself using the first or second person, you're probably getting the tone wrong. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:21, 4 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]