User talk:MaxGentino/sandbox
Max's Peer Review
[edit]You incorporated some good ideas you will like to mention in your article. This acts as the outline you set for yourself to incorporate more ideas into your writing. I like how you wanted to include a new section for a new topic that relates to GBL and continue to edit work into the already given information on your page. Just make sure to include your sources in your writing and as well at the bottom of the page in the source list.