User talk:Mattvoza/sandbox/active fire protection
Johanna's Peer Review
[edit]I thought this article was extremely well written and was well thought out. The article flows and is easy to understand for the reader and someone who is not involved in active fire protection. Links were added to give more information on topics. These links make sense and are useful. The article provides clear structure and has balanced content. You used appropriate references and external links. Also, you included pictures which is a nice touch. I think you made good use of the tools available and you have a lot of knowledge on the subject. One area that I think could use work is proofreading, but because this is early stages I'm sure that will be corrected. Great Job!!!