User talk:MatthewDBA/Montessori method
Proposed outline looks good
[edit]The following sections are much too specific to warrant their own section on the public page
- Kilpatrick's 1913 Criticism of Montessori
- Ayn Rand's Praise
- From Childhood to Adolescence
It would make more sense to implement your structure and include these as sub-topics, or even just as paragraphs in a larger context. For example,
- Criticism
- Kilpatrick (c.1913)
- Other Works
- From Childhood to Adolescence
... and so on.
Daddy.twins (talk) 16:05, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
another proposal under construction
[edit]I applaud your interest in a "revamp" of the page. I too am working on this as well. Please visit my userpage for an examination. There are glaring omissions and much that needs to be clarified to make it a truly useful, accurate article. I would appreciate your comments on how my proposal is coming along. I have only worked on the introduction and history sections so far.Havis1 (talk) 19:23, 16 November 2009 (UTC)