User talk:Mat280

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20:04, 29 August 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!

Hello, Mat280, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:31, 31 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Shimulo2 (talk) 22:49, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing FLS2 article

Hi there,

Thank you for your contribution to wikipedia. The article is written concisely and the word chosen wisely though has more room for improvements. I could not find any turn or any phrase that can describe the subject in a clear way, incase, the subject is a gene. I think, you haven't complete your article and trying to do improvement. Here is some suggestions from me

Give a good Title of the article that should be paraphrase your content
Please include some wikilink (I have included some)
Develop your content as it looks like underdevelopment
Most Importantly You can divede your article in severel sections so that the readers can focus on specific content
Please include gene family as it needs in wikiarticle when you edit an article that focus on gene
You can write your lead section more precisely and also seperately as your article looks witout lead sections
Use italic form to write the gene and scientific name
Your article has not sufficient references. Please add more reliable references
Overall Your article looks like rudimentary so you have plenty of options to develop.
The writing style of your article is good which can I use in my article

Thank you. Please leave feedback of my article and I will hihgly appreciate. If you have any questions about my review please let me know.

Shimulo2 (talk) 22:49, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]