User talk:Maryannelindemann

This user is a student editor in University_at_Albany/Information_Literacy_in_the_Humanities_and_Arts_(Fall_2021) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:02, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WCI Peer Review

Starting off, the lead could use an additon of information. The last sentense in the Premise section felt opinionated, maybe if it was reworded it would sound more factual. Also consider maybe adding another POV in that Permise section. The launguage, although its a draft could be more complex. I agree with the other reviewers that the History section should be placed in an alternative part of the history section or be taken out because the section discusses illegality while yours discusses the transition of legal to illegal and the consequences. Another thing to circle back to or reconsider is adding more sources. I felt your additions needed more balence in coverage as well.4u59834y698357658 (talk) 15:47, 28 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]