User talk:Mar.nw/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]-The structure and information of the article are all well researched and easy to follow. Compared to previous versions of this article where sources were rarely accurate, this version (of those that I checked) were accurate. In terms of structure, I would suggest simplifying the article by putting the section about the sarcophagus into the history section.
-I don't know how much information in available about the subject, but adding more to the Commemoration section may be warranted. Or it could be simpler to incorporate that into either the end of the history section or the intro.
- Maybe expand on the current location and more detail about the cuirassed statue.
All in, your contributions have changed this article from a poorly cited but probably well meaning article, into what is now a researched professional article that backs up its facts.