User talk:Maltuwaijeri/sandbox
The information is there and I think you have a good start, but it reads choppy at some points which makes it hard to understand and is easily confused. Specifically, 'Concepts of Narrative Therapy', 'What to loo for in Narrative Therapy', 'Assumptions of Solution-Foucsed Therapy', 'Deconstruction and Creating Alternative Stories', as well as 'Concepts of Social Construction.' This all read very choppy and I have a hard time understand what you are trying to say. I think it would be helpful to bullet point most of the sentences and then break them down and add more information to them. I was especially at a loss about the sentencing "Presuming that everyone is able to write his or her own life." in the 'Deconstruction and Creating Alternative Stories' area. It doesn't fit at all currently, but I think if you were to expand on that idea it would be beneficial to the page. Make sure to decide whether you want your headers to be bolded or not, having one bolded and one not is inconstant and will make your page look unprofessional. I'm assuming Case Study Effectiveness/ Future Possibilities and so on is what you plan to add to the page, and I think all of those are a good idea and will make your page better. Overall, make sure to expand on your ideas, this is an informative page meaning it needs to provide information, and in some areas I'm not seeing that. Good luck and I think you're off to a good start!
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