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Your submission at Articles for creation: UM Wolves RFC (December 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see the referencing tutorial at WP:INTREFVE

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Qcne (talk) 15:43, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Males98! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 15:43, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:UM Wolves RFC has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:UM Wolves RFC. Thanks! SportingFlyer T·C 02:00, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: UM Wolves RFC (December 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MicrobiologyMarcus was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I've removed the sponsors but I agree with the concerns about promotional language. With a strong University-based following, the Club has built a strong image and a vibrant social atmosphere in the past six years of its existence is puffery and has four citations that don't even back up what it is saying. The article should simply be written in a factual, encyclopedic prose.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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microbiologyMarcus ^{(petri dish·growths)} 17:12, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:UM Wolves RFC

Hello, Males98. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:UM Wolves RFC, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 18:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MintyFresh201 was:

Sounds Promotional

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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MintyFresh201 (talk) 23:18, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: It is an excellent article and you have clearly put a lot of effort into it, but it sounds to promotional and sounds like it has been written from a biased point of view. Please let me know if you have any questions or comments, as I would be more than happy to help you write this article. Please respond on my talk page. Best, MintyFresh201

Your draft article, Draft:UM Wolves RFC

Hello, Males98. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "UM Wolves RFC".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:42, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]