User talk:MakoTheShark/sandbox
Hi Kyle,
I think what you have here looks good, but I don't see any references, so I'm not sure where you're getting this information or how much is in your words and how much is summarized. You need to have at least several good citations to support your article and you'll need to properly attribute everything that you include. Also, I think you could flesh out some of these points a little, but it's hard to tell without knowing what the original source material says.