User talk:Madisondaoust

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:44, 5 February 2020 (UTC)

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I like the way the paragraphs are split up, it makes the article section much easier to read. I did notice that both the first and second paragraphs mention Hawaii as a melting pot. I don’t think it’s necessary to mention it in both sections, so I would probably just mention that Hawaii is known as the melting pot in the first paragraph and then just say “Hawaii provides a vibrant, wide array of styles and mediums for art creations and workings.” in the second paragraph.

Laurenk17 (talk) 01:07, 10 March 2020 (UTC)

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	Hey, the great post was very descriptive and informative. I wish there were more links to other Wikipedia pages (unique works of art) Jaharialayeart (talk) 20:14, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

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I like all the information you included. I think you provide good information to the history of Hawaiian art and what that particular type of art includes Jordyn Kozik (talk) 19:00, 20 March 2020 (UTC)

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	Very good work, your information is very detailed, and grammatically correct. Just make sure you add the sources you used in your references, and there are a few errors in "Pacfic" a missing period after "artists" and after "include" the colon is missing. Mariamelia Zaragoza (talk) 22:49, 22 March 2020 (UTC)

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I think all of this information is really interesting! It is a very interesting topic. In addition, I think that using headings will help generalize the information (unless they are already in the original article). Overall really good job, just don't forget to add the sources. Adellert (talk) 02:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

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Amazing Information! You had all your sources and it is evident that you know about the topic. Orodriguezr (talk) 17:36, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

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Hi Madi! I think what you had to say was really informational about your topic. However, your edits seem to be missing some links so that way we (as readers) know what website you are using aside from your source citings.

ChloeM99 (talk) 20:56, 23 March 2020 (UTC)