User talk:Madelgdowski01
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:07, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
Christian denomination peer review
[edit]Your contribution to the definition of Christian denomination is straightforward and very easy to understand. Your tone and point of view was neutral and did not sound biased at all. I don't see a reference page with links to show where you got your information from. I would make sure to include that so that we can reference your sources. I liked that you were able to include the style that the service is conducted in. It gives the reader a visual representation of what the service would look like. I think going more in detail of the different traditions and the ways of worships could elevate the definition of Christian denomination. I noticed that you put quotations around the word denomination. I think defining that word would also help the reader have a better idea of what that means and how it relates to the religion. Also explaining the different types of core Christian values would be useful as well. SunnyWooKimSunnyWooKim (talk) 06:48, 13 November 2022 (UTC)