User talk:Maddieaalund/sandbox

Madelyn's Sandbox Page

Maddie, Everything looks great when I went through the articles you are editing. We discusses verbally some suggestions for edits a couple weeks ago. I just went through for a second time and just added like 1 or 2 grammar edits. Other than that, great job! It looks great! Tiffanyizer (talk) 16:12, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Peer Edit

Hi Maddie.

I chose to look at your sandbox for a peer review because I thought you really knew what you were doing when it comes to wikipedia. I feel like it is kind of hard. So by peer reviewing your contributions, I feel like I can learn from that. I like that you chose a different topic. It is not something I have ever heard of. You explained the material in a way that made it easy to understand, which I think is good for wikipedia. Since all the people who are going to be reading the page are not experts, and are using the page for reference. So you did a really good job there. Your grammar was really good so I didn't need to make any corrections. Ho154095 (talk) 17:59, 18 June 2017 (UTC)