User talk:Macris1982

Speedy deletion nomination of Mario J. Brown

Hello Macris1982,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Mario J. Brown for deletion, because it seems to be promotional, rather than an encyclopedia article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Runarb (talk) 19:01, 18 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Talkback

Hello, Macris1982. You have new messages at Runarb's talk page.
Message added 20:33, 18 September 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.[reply]

I'll comment on the sandboxed version

you have attempted to provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show he it meets the notability guidelines. However, substantial parts of the text are unreferenced still. Commercial sites such as Amazon are not acceptable as independent references, nor are sites that can be edited by their subject. You first reference to mobilebizbox isn't formatted as a weblink.
it is still written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced or inappropriately sourced claims presented as fact include: Best known for his influence as a leader... by helping local businesses... Best Selling... he teaches entrepreneurs how to start and manage their own Internet Marketing business... successfully studied foreign trade... He decided to move to Ecuador in search of adventure and in pursuit of happiness... he developed the passion for entrepreneurship and marketing... He overcame the language barriers and the challenges regarding the unstable economy... easily sustain himself as a private teacher... nothing but his backpack and a dream... most recognized past products... He is also well-known... — basically it's a fan page
Bolding his book titles is spammy too. Books are italicised only.
Some formatting tips

wikilink, eg Durham, North Carolina, Nuremberg
format your references as [url description], looks much better than bare urls
Only the first word of headings should be capitalised

I hope this helps Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:34, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for your feedback and for giving me examples of things that don't sound right! I was using this wiki as a reference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mike_Filsaime&action=submit but it looks like I chose the wrong article to get inspired by :) I will implement changes and get back to you. Thanks again!--Macris1982 (talk) 12:11, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I made some changes and I'd like to hear your feedback before I make the article live. It's still in my sandbox, so the link is the same :) Thanks again!--Macris1982 (talk) 02:25, 22 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mario Brown (October 17)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Ross Hill (talk) 21:43, 17 Oct 2013 (UTC) 21:43, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Macris1982, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mario Brown

Hello Macris1982. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Mario Brown".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code: {{subst:Refund/G13|Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mario Brown}}, paste it in the edit box at this link, click "Save page", and an administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Rankersbo (talk) 12:21, 26 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]