User talk:MSederberg21

Article Feedback (Psyc 212)

Cerebral softening is already being worked on by a student from another university. Go ahead and choose either of the others. Mpetracca (talk) 15:30, 27 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Overall fantastic job on the article. It's stub status has been removed! Only minor issues: you should add an image of some kind (maybe of Engel?) and the introduction and overview are repetitive. Otherwise excellent work! Mpetracca (talk) 17:19, 5 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have added an image of Engel under the history section, as you suggested. However, I did not edit the repetitiveness that occurs in the introduction and the overview sections, because I am unsure how to reformat this without losing the valuable information of both the shorthand version of the system and the expanded, annotated version of the classification system. I think there is value in having the shorthand version of the system listed at the introductory section of the article, for easily understanding the system without reading a lengthy description, and I also think there is value in having the annotated version of the system later on in the article for readers who want a more detailed explanation (or for readers who want to know the exceptions of each class). Thank you for the feedback and I will continue to consider how to better format the repetitive nature of my article. MSederberg21 (talk) 04:51, 7 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Topic Choice?

Hey Matt,

Michele said that you were thinking about doing "hereditary motor and sensory neuropathy" for your topic as well. Are you still thinking about it? If you are, please let me know and I'll look into my other topics. Thanks Lmaas5 (talk) 15:46, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Nope I decided to go with a different topic. So that one is all yours! MSederberg21 (talk) 16:02, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Chosen Topic

This semester, I will be working on the Engel class article. MSederberg21 (talk) 05:06, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Good start in your sandbox but it needs to be expanded. Once you get a bit more substantial additions AND have all the proper citations and references, go ahead and move it to the main page. Let me know when you do this so I can adjust your grade. Mpetracca (talk) 20:18, 31 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]