User talk:Lyzbeths/New sandbox

The next things I have planned for the article are, I will add an additional example of what sexism in video games. Continue editing the article making sure everything is in the right place. I will also adding academic sources to back up my examples and any other information. I will also go over the information I have added and ensure that it is correct. I will also add the missing citations I need for information about Sony.

After I posted my changed to Wikipedia all of my changes were reverted. I looked through the talk page and the only thing that I seen was that it said "poor grammar" but it was not specific about what the issue was. I decided to not put the issue any further instead I will look over my sandbox edits and make sure they do not have any errors. I think that it would have been nice for the person who changed my edits to be a bit more specific about what the issue was throughout all the changes. They did not post anything in the talk page nut instead I had to look through the history to find the changes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lyzbeths (talk • contribs) 06:07, 8 December 2021 (UTC)