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Please use high quality references per WP:MEDRS such as review articles or major textbooks. Note that review articles are NOT the same as peer reviewed articles. A good place to find medical sources is TRIP database Thanks.

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:16, 10 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I use verified sources direct from journals, and using the National Institute of Health's database, Pubmed. It might be a great source for you to reference. I think I will stay with that qualified reference database, but thank you for the other suggestion.
Will move the content here. There are a number of issues. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:39, 12 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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It is not conclusive to the exact cause of insulin resistance associated with PCOS. However, there is a correlation between insulin resistance in polycystic ovarian syndrome and pancreatic beta-cell dysfunction. Elevated levels of heat shock protein, eHSP72, as an inflammatory marker, has contributed to the damage of pancreatic beta cells and increased occurrence rate of insulin resistance. Additional evidence to dysfunction has been noted in immunological toll-like receptors and NLRP3 regulators, and on the genetic level, and deletion of the IG20/MADD DNA sequence resulted in increased rates of beta cell dysfunction, glucose intolerance, and reduced or delayed glucose-induced insulin production.[1]

  1. ^ Calafiore R1, Montanucci P, Basta G. (April 2014). "Stem cells for pancreatic β-cell replacement in diabetes mellitus: actual perspectives". Clinical Opinion in Organ Transplant. 19 (2): 162-168. doi:10.1097/MOT.0000000000000055. PMID 24553500.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link) CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link)
  • Most of what you have used as references are primary sources. We typically require secondary sources. You can find secondary sources on pubmed.
  • I have left the one secondary source attached. The problem with that review article is it does not once mentioned the topic of the article in question. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:39, 12 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Laundry lists

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Hi Lwoody08. I reverted your insertion of long "laundry lists" of books on a couple of horse articles (Foal and Horse training). Books such as these should only be used if they are being used as sources for the actual article, and ideally as footnotes. Montanabw(talk) 02:15, 10 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Hi Montanabw. There is a reason for the list, because a number of the listed references were insufficient for funding learning opportunities, and providing references for those who utilize a website such as wikipedia for additional information, resources and references. I did provide them as references, and am more than willing to cite them with individual footnotes, but maybe I should have sited them, as other pages have done, as 'additional outside references'.

Consideration should be taken next time to allot for additional references, because the lack of recognizing such additions to support the learning of those in the equestrian culture seeking to learn more, can thus leads to deficits and ultimately thwarts efforts upon self-studiers and homeschoolers. [[User:lwoody08lwoody08]](talk) 21:52, 31 May 2015 (GMT)

Thank you for the consideration, though.

You need to read WP:NOADS and WP:CITE. You seem to not understand how things work here. I'm glad to help, but your attitude needs to improve. Montanabw(talk) 02:09, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]