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Rachel Seagren review on Geography in Laos Article draft by Luzaguirre

The outline you have in your sandbox is clear and it seems that what you are looking to write will be comprehensive and the right amount of brevity.

At this point, the article needs to be fleshed out with more sources and writing. You have so many quality sources listed which is great.

You have a good sense of structure and planning, now the article needs to be filled in. I could definitely focus on more planning and structure of my article and you do this well.

I'm curious is transportation routes is really a relevant section to have under a page on the geography of a country? Maybe check and see if this a normal thing for country geography pages to have.

Thanks, Rachel