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Dong ba script Comment #1
[edit]I read your revisions, and I think you put up some good information. I have a question regarding this sentence. "As the Dongba script evolves and develops, Naxi people begin to also use the Dongba script to compose writing documents such as inventory, contract and letters although it is not as widely used as Geba script in such context." I thought the sentence should be written in the past tense? --Frandis (talk) 18:35, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for pointing it out. I will change this sentence to "As the Dongba script evolved an developed, Naxi people also begun to use the Dongba script to compose writing documents such as inventory, contract, and letters, although it is not as widely used as Geba script in such context."
Do you think there is anything unclear about my terminology? Thanks again for commenting on my edit!