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when did it get installed 4B5T:N1N:5104:E621:5M93:334C:X1MN:NE32 (talk) 07:43, 13 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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Reviewer: ExpertNovice77 (talk · contribs) 10:41, 10 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Copyvio check

Nothing major to worry about.
Suggest changing "In 1932, the first electrical socket in the White House—NEMA 1-15—was installed during the Hoover Administration to power a lamp, located in the president's bedroom."
- Should be alr now?
  - Yes, that works.

Article

Per MOS:LEAD the citations will be in the text itself and not the lead.
- Fixed.

"Though the United Kingdom had been installing power plugs and electrical sockets since 1881, the United States did not do so, thus meaning that the White House could not have a socket itself" sounds very awkward.
- Would "However, while the United Kingdom had begun installing power plugs and electrical sockets in 1881, the United States did not; this meant that the White House was unable to have electrical sockets" work?
  - Yep - looks good.

"Hubbell first began to experiment with three-way adaptors in 1906." needs to be cited.
- Fixed.

"On 23 January, the socket to the south-east of the President's desk in the Oval Office was changed to a NEMA 5-15 outlet." any source say why?
- Added.

"it then powered an answering machine." until when?
- Added.

References

ok

Bibliography

ok

External links

FYI, I added a link to commons.

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Why??

Why does this article even exist :/ Henrisodgd13 (talk) 17:59, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

While, the topic has received wide coverage from many RS sources and even been featured in some books.. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 08:05, 5 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]