User talk:Lucaswalters/sandbox

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Peer Review

Hey! i thought your article was very well done. The intro i think is very good, nice layout and i liked how you had a-lot of references. My only comments are that i feel like fish make up a big portion of algae feeders so i think having a section for them could be a good idea. Also are there any morphological adaptations that are characteristic to some/all algivoires? Because i there is i think that would be interesting to include. Really enjoyed it!

Slt724 (talk) 02:58, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review

The article content is good. My only major suggestion is to reword some sections in order to aid the flow. Rather than separating particular species and taxa in several subsections, have the text in the invertebrate and vertebrates section be a series of paragraphs. For example, begin talking about mayflies, and that the majority work has be done on the genus Ameletus. Then say that further work has been done on Nanorchestes mites. I think this will make your article flow a lot better.

Hope that helps!

Jpethier (talk) 17:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)jpethier