User talk:Lstaben15/sandbox

Peer Review

Hello Lauren,

These are my only two edits I would make and you can choose to change them or not.

Your title reads the origins of modesty but your paragraph is mostly informative on the place of modesty for women and where is came from. I think making that distinction in your title would help people reading wikipedia find the information you are writing about more readily.

Lastly, put your source superscripts outside of the quotation marks. Otherwise it seems like what you are quoting has a citation in it.

Otherwise, your sources look great and you have very unbiased wording. Good job. Gfrench55clu (talk) 00:44, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for the helpful tips. I changed my superscripts and it now looks a lot better. I also changed my title as well, I did realize that it applied more to women's place in society regarding modesty. --Lstaben15 (talk) 20:47, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review

I really like the research you've done for your topic. I felt your sources were very informative and your explanation of them was very thorough and unbiased. I do recommend doing the edits that the previous user mentioned. It would help better understand the direction of your paragraph. Matt Tosa (talk) 23:30, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for the advice. I made those following changes. I'm glad to hear that my information is unbiased and well explained. --Lstaben15 (talk) 20:46, 2 March 2017 (UTC)