User talk:Lsherry9/sandbox

Forensic Nursing Peer Review

Dear Lauren, I really like your topic choice and your additions to the article. You add two in depth responsibilities of the nurses to the article that were not present before. These new topics really add to the article and go further into the many jobs of forensic nurses. Your additions strengthen the whole section on “Role and Responsibilities”. Furthermore, I like your incorporation of multiple sources for each section you added. This is something I am going to use in my article, as I need to use more sources for the sections I added instead of just one for each. I would maybe add a few more sections to the article and discuss other jobs of forensic nurses perhaps, if there are more that is. I would maybe also add a little bit more to the history of forensic nursing. The most important thing you could do for the article is find more information not related to role and responsibilities but to the other sections of the article, and even create new sections. I know there is not a lot of information on this topic but there is not a great balance of information, as 90 percent of the article is under the Role and Responsibilities section. Overall, you had great additions to the article. You did a very good job of organizing and presenting your information. Good luck with the rest of your project. Willclisham (talk) 00:47, 5 April 2016 (UTC)William Clisham