User talk:Lrsteele103/sandbox/Honeysuckle Bower
Peer Review
[edit]In the section titled Symbolism, you begin with Dextrarum iuncito being a ceremony, but I think it would be helpful if you started with where Detrarum iuncito is or what it is within the piece.
You also have examples of love and marriage symbolism in the description section, which should be moved to the symbolism section, and more detail about the painting put within the description section. Examples of a description you could add are Medium used, proportions, and basic descriptions of content and form. I also think the use of “In other words,” in the section Historical context may be a little too informal.
I did find the scroll over/pop up definitions throughout the page to be extremely helpful. Overall, I think you have a good structure and neutral content that can be further developed to make a great page. Misfit1723 (talk) 17:50, 14 April 2023 (UTC)