User talk:Lrichar/sandbox

Hi Llyleila, I think you have done good job for your person: Barbara Palmer. I enjoyed reading about her. There are some suggestions I have though: 1. Can you make the sentence you added in this section a little clearer? I was a little confused on your wording. "As a reward for her services, the King created her husband Baron Limerick and Earl of Castlemaine in 1661, titles that would only be passed down through his heirs by her." 2. I would make "This initially began upon the Queen's arrival at Portsmouth, the customary bonfire outside Lady Castlemaine's house was left conspicuously unlit" into their own sentences. 3. Did you mean "made her a popular figure for satirists?"

--Kmpittman (talk) 19:29, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Kmpittman[reply]

Hello, you picked a very interesting topic. Your contributions help the article flow better. Don't second guess yourself and continue making this article better. Bnevis (talk) 00:47, 28 April 2020 (UTC) Bnevis[reply]