User talk:Loyaltyvexed
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[edit]Hello, Loyaltyvexed, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:05, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
May 2016
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Hello, I'm Oshwah. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —the one you made with this edit to Martin Wong— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. ~Oshwah~(talk) (contribs) 06:52, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I thought you did a wonderful job on Martin Wong's wikipage. You used a good amount of sources, skillfully divided the material into sections, and also connected Martin Wong to a large amount of other art schools, museums, styles, etc. Great job! In the middle of the career section, I believe that the obituary quote and more info on his acclaim after his death could be moved to the legacy section to make the page a bit more chronological, and overall flow a bit more. I also think the line, "his graffiti collection is perhaps the largest in the world" could be replaced with something closer to "he had a large poetry collection" in order to convey less emotion. Overall I think you did great work. Let me know if you have any questions. Seanmgonzales (talk) 23:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC) Seanmgonzales