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Hello! I have recently added some content on to the wiki page for Provoke Magazine. I was wondering if you could have a look at it and provide some feedback for me? I am fairly new to Wikipedia so any suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you. Andrew34jack (talk) 20:37, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Andrew! Sorry, I didn't realize there was any messaging feature on wikipedia! So I must be very late to your project. Sorry I missed this so long ago.

If this is your research interest and you live in NYC, you might want to make an appointment to check out the photography books and catalogues in the library at Alison Bradley Projects. They know a loooot about photography in the 1970s!

I don't know too much about Provoke to be honest, but I'll give you feedback as an art historical wiki editor. I worked as a Wikipedia Fellow for PoNJA GenKon in 2021 so I had a chance to learn a lot from art historian Reiko Tomii.

Her most basic rules for these entries are:

- Each sentence usually needs to have a published citation, with even greater urgency if you are not bilingual/local to that place). Warning you, as I have been flagged.

- Always show the Japanese name in kanji, hiragana, and use local diacritics.

- No conflicts of interest. Keep yourself out of it.

Your entry is overall really great! You've clearly done a great amount of research, and contextualize the historical moment to make it clear what their stakes are! I learned a lot. My main feedback is that you need to cite more. If i were you, i would also break it up a little for the everyday reader, since its a public wiki page and not your original analysis (i think wiki is a good place to gather published research, but its not an original research site, otherwise it would even more quickly become unreliable).

To do this: I'd create a clear categorical difference between the the history of Provoke and the background geopolitical history. Its great to set the stage because it makes the artist's intentions so much more clear, but I still think that paragraphs 4-5 of "History" should come first, but written more for the general reader (like a summary abstract). Then the "Historical Context" sub-section can come in, where you can further explain in detail!

One more note — especially at the end when you are introducing research, it would be helpful for users if you link these in citations (also helpful for developing SEO for the topic).

Best wishes,

Eimi LoveKawasaki77 (talk) 09:17, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]