User talk:Lourdesramir
Welcome!
[edit]Hello, Lourdesramir, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:11, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --ProfDRS (talk) 19:49, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
Feedback
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For starters, I think you should take a close look at the Editing Wikipedia brochure, especially pages 8-7. You should have received a hard copy from your instructor, but just in case, I have linked to it above. You should also look at the Biographies handout (also linked) that should give you some sense of the topics you should cover and the sections it should have.
You need to base your article primarily on sources published by reliable third parties who are independent of the subject of a biography. Sources also need to be verifiable - an interview fails the first, so it shouldn't be the primary source, but more importantly, if it's to be used it needs to be archived somewhere that people can verify its content. In addition, you need to use properly-formatted inline citations. If you aren’t sure how to do this, please see this page. Finally, you need to include links to other articles. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:11, 30 November 2016 (UTC)
Additional feedback
[edit]I made a few edits to your article. My main concern is the image you used. You need to provide evidence that the image has been released by the copyright holder under a license that's compatible with Wikipedia. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:12, 13 December 2016 (UTC)