User talk:Lostautumn

Chzz

Hi there.

I'm working on this, please hold on a bit. I'll answer more, here, within 30 minutes. Thanks, Chzz ► 22:59, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lostautunm, having looked at the article, my advice is to copy it to your user-space, work on it there, and - if/when you can fix the problems with it - to ask for it to be made live.

Problems currently include;

Lack of references for all facts; for example, Andrew James Schorr (born September 28, 1950) - where can we check that? best known as the founder of HealthTalk - who says he is 'best known' for that? founder and host of Patient Power ^{[citation needed]}...and so on
References are to "everydayhealth.com" and the blog on that site. At best, this is a primary source. A blog is certainly not a reliable source

All facts need to be verifiable in a reliable source.

A lot of things need fixing, in particular to conform with our policy regarding biographies of living people - therefore, I am (below) going to ask an administrator to move this article into your user-space, where you can work on it.

If you can try to fix the issues, please put {{helpme}} right here, on your own user talk page, and we'll help.

Best, Chzz ► 23:10, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

{{adminhelp|Per the above: I suggest the best approach is to move Andrew Schorr to user-space, allowing this user to work on it.}} Chzz ► 23:10, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Done User:Lostautumn/Andrew Schorr Ronhjones ^(Talk) 23:18, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Superb; thanks, Ronhjones.

So, Lostautum, I now suggest you edit that page - User:Lostautumn/Andrew Schorr - and work on the references, and the other points I mentioned. It'd also help if you edited other articles -to learn more about Wikipedia, and avoid being labelled a single-purpose account.

Use another {{helpme}} here, on your own page, for further help. Best of luck, Chzz ► 23:22, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]