User talk:Loreleiewalker

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Man, I have like a buffalo in a china shop on this site. I have updated the page with my interpretation of what the center does for reference for others. It is not showing when I search wiki...

April 2012

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Review of CGHE piece

Hi Lorelei, I am signed up to review your section for this class project. I understand you were trying to create a page on CGHE, but might I suggest that instead, you tweak the paragraph that was added to the NHGRI page to talk more generally about the CEER program. I like that you added the list of the other CEERS, and a short intro to what they are. I think that perhaps it would make sense to restructure that paragraph to focus on a short explanation of the ELSI program, the development of the CEER concept, and then a short blurb on each existing CEER, perhaps linking to their websites. As it stands now, it looks like CGHE is the primary or only CEER, and maybe that's why it sounds partial to the wiki bots and curators. It wouldn't have to be extensive, but a note on the ELSI program in general and the CEERs specifically would be great, and link to the ELSI wikipedia page too.

-Kate — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katephg (talk • contribs) 01:02, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lorelei,

Looks like you did a ton of work! I'm not sure that I have anything to add to Kate's useful comments. --Taryn0h (talk) 04:27, 16 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent edits

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