User talk:Lonelychild1/Urban ecology

Peer Review

I'm done with the peer review of your article. Timmy Thyme (talk) 19:43, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like you're on the right track. Make sure to be focused on your topic and not just any section of interest. Timmy Thyme (talk) 20:36, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Timmy,

I appreciated your review. I do agree that some components of the article need to be edited for an easier read and more grammatical errors need to be fixed. I also agree on your change of subheadings as I feel like there needs to be a stronger connection to our Life on Land topic EstherM04 (talk) 20:43, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review #2

Hi Cbutron,

Thank you for your input. We will be adding images to our draft to make the article more appealing. We are also in the process of adding more citations to the sections lacking them but we have added more from the original article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by EstherM04 (talk • contribs) 20:02, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]