User talk:Lmart12/sandbox

Kailyn Riedel's Peer Review

Good morning Lmart12! I just wanted to start off by letting you know that you have provided some great edits to the "Age Stratification" Wikipedia Article so far. I can tell that you put a lot of time and effort into making sure that what you were adding made sense for the Article and that it connected with the main topic. I think it was helpful in that you made sure there was a definite definition for Age Stratification as it is the main talk point of the article. As I keep reading in your Sandbox, I can also tell that you the specific definition from the Population: An Introduction to Concepts and Issues by John R. Weeks which is a credible source. You have neutral content with clear and precise facts and statistics within your edits and that is the key to success for this assignment! Something else that caught my eye was that you incorporated the dependency ratio which is awesome! The "Age Discrimination" was a great subtitle to the Article and is worth of expanding on. In order to improve the article I would elaborate more to this part. Also, maybe try finding another picture to add to the Article. Overall, you have yourself some good edits and credible sources, keep up the great work! :) (Kailynriedel (talk) 20:30, 3 April 2018 (UTC))