User talk:Lizgonzalez511
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[edit]Hi! My notes are this:
I would find more sourcing to back up the claims that you added to the criticisms section, since you're putting a lot of weight on those two sources, one of which is a study. The study comes with its own issues, as this is a primary source for the research and data conducted/created by its authors. This really needs a secondary source like a literature review or a similar journal article that discusses the findings. This book looks like it could be very useful, as a look in the Google Books preview shows that it discusses criticism of Emily's List. It'd be worth using, either as something that backs up the study (if this is mentioned) or as something to use to cover criticism of EMILY's List. This looks like it could also be useful. You also want to avoid putting too much weight on specific sources unless there is a lot of coverage to justify highlighting them in so much detail.
I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:58, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
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