User talk:Lizb07

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Thanks for the edit to Doña Ana Community College in my sandbox.--Joe (talk) 02:28, 17 January 2014 (UTC)

Lizb07 edits of Maidmarian55's Carnegie Library article

The grammar and punctuation edits you made added clarity, readability, and fluidity to the article. Your edits substantially improve the writing in the article. --Maidmarian55 (talk) 04:02, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you! Maidmarian55

--Lizb07 (talk) 21:51, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Suggested improvements for the Las Cruces Events articles

I think it would visually improve your edit by using bullet points. You also might start the listing of each event with the date of the event. Creating the events section really helps the reader get a sense of the community culture. --Maidmarian55 (talk) 04:06, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you Maidmarian55 for your input. I'm unclear as to how I would effectively use the bullet points within the article. I can definitely look into it though. I thought about including the dates, but found that some of the festivals were held on different days every year. I thought it might throw off the consistency of the article if I were to list some and not others.

--Lizb07 (talk) 21:58, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Feedback

The information added to the Las Cruces, New Mexico page has really helped to improve the page, which I feel has been a great contribution to the page. I really liked how you were able to incorporate majority of the activities in the Las Cruces area, it is something that visitors can take into consideration when in the area. Another thing I really liked is how you provided information on each event so readers can become familiar with the event you are discussing. One suggestion I can make is to added some more information on what is the Artsfair is, for example include some more of the activities that are done/presented in the show. Trinityo12 (talk) 06:32, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

That's a great suggestion Trinityo12! I will certainly look into expanding that section of the article.

--Lizb07 (talk) 22:00, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Annual Events Feedback

How you included a lot of the events here in Las Cruces was great thing since most of us live here. The links that you provided us with some pages that explained a lot to us. How you provided us with an section about a huge enchilada that is in the Guinness world record book I didn't even know that. I recommend including a little more events like The walking dead that they have every Halloween at the mall and the pumpkin festival held every October.--BrantDaMerc (talk) 09:09, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the suggestions BrantDaMerc. I had no idea those events were held in Las Cruces. I haven't lived there in awhile. They sure do sound interesting and may fit nicely into the article. I'll look into them.

--Lizb07 (talk) 22:02, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Your welcome Lizb07 I have always loved going to the pumpkin festival.--BrantDaMerc (talk) 08:33, 22 February 2014 (UTC)