User talk:Liz betht

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Hello, Liz betht, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:11, 16 January 2019 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! I have some notes:

• The draft needs more sourcing - only a few things are sourced, which poses a huge issue when it comes to biographical data. You also need the sourcing to establish notability. The live article has sourcing, which you should be able to use, but this will definitely need additional sources.
• When writing about art interpretation, make sure that you attribute the claims in the article along the lines of "According to..." or "This Person says...". The main issue here is that otherwise it can come across as original research - your own personal interpretation of the source material.
• The way that the article is formatted is good, so well done with that!

I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:11, 22 February 2019 (UTC)