User talk:LisaH

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Feedback on your article

Hello LisaH, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. I especially will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay.

Intro sentence: You try to say too much at once in the first sentence. You can split it into two. Next, please add to the first sentence more context information about the author, like his origin, profession, birth-death (between brackets), etc.
Links: okay
Headers: okay
References: You made a good start with these four references. If you can find/add/use more references and sources that would improve your article.
Context/timeframe: ?
How was the book received: great!
Other: Great you used an infobox!

I hope you can implement this feedback to your sandbox article before our next meeting. Thanks! Romaine (talk) 09:15, 10 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello LisaH, Thank you for improving your article! Last week we specifically asked to make sure you add sources/references to your article, because that is one of the most important parts of a Wikipedia article. We also wanted to make sure the intro sentence/section is ready. Let's see how it is going now.

Intro sentence: good!
Links: okay, maybe a few keywords more may have a link.
Headers: Good, but no reason to capitalise the R: "Jung’s Reception", lowercase please.
References: A small detail: add references behind the dot and no space between the dot and the reference. Please add if possible also references in the section "Content" to where certain parts come from in the book, like the chapter or page.
Context/timeframe: great!
How was the book received: great! If you can find another reception (from someone else), this would be very welcome!
Other: Thank you for the "See also" section!

Keep up the good work! Romaine (talk) 01:35, 17 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello LisaH, I add the image of the book to your sandbox article. Romaine (talk) 05:52, 23 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]