User talk:Lilykhinz

Hello, Lilykhinz. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. JSFarman (talk) 22:11, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I went ahead and included the COI disclosure on my user page. I do comms and marketing at the company in question (Shield AI). I have made changes to the post to make it less advertorial/editorialized.

Lilykhinz (talk) 22:41, 26 April 2022 (UTC)Lilykhinz[reply]

Hi, thanks for the disclosure.

The draft needs to be neutral and it's still got a lot of glow. Also, read up on sources - references need to be via independent, reliable sources.

There is *so* much written about the company - fantastic job you're doing - ! You can write a great article. JSFarman (talk) 23:43, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I have made some fairly significant changes. This is my first time ever creating an article on Wikipedia so I appreciate your patience as I trudge through it.

Lilykhinz (talk)Lilykhinz Lilykhinz (talk) 01:37, 27 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again. I believe the draft has closely paraphrased other articles/content I've read on the company. Can you give it an edit and make sure it is 100% your writing? And then give it an edit for tone? Get rid of the buzz words, the non-neutral language ("powered by Hivemind") and write in past tense. (Wikipedia is meant to be evergreeen.) And then we will be good to go. Smiley face. (Thanks!) JSFarman (talk) 23:37, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It is looking really good. I went in and changed "powered" and confirmed everything that should be past tense is past tense. I was going to try to add the company's logo and some images but that just isn't the priority right now. Lilykhinz (talk) 13:02, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The tone is still off and neutrality is more of a priority than images ever will be. I'll leave it alone from here on in - I don't think I am unbiased at this point - but I will remove the template and my now-unnecessary comment re: COI. JSFarman (talk) 17:19, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI (May 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Shield AI and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Shield AI, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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DGG ( talk ) 20:09, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Lilykhinz! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 20:09, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI has been accepted

Shield AI, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.

If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider leaving us some feedback.

Thanks again, and happy editing!

S0091 (talk) 17:11, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI V-BAT (May 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from The second paragraph is largely copied as-is from the second source. This is a copyright violation and must be corrected.. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Shield AI V-BAT may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page. or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Marshelec (talk) 07:44, 25 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI V-BAT (October 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Darling was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Airforce & Naval Technology sources seem to take WP:SPONSORED content, making them questionable for use given both sources are directly about the system; defensenews and c4isrnet source are brief mentions.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Shield AI V-BAT and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

—darling (talk) 22:48, 4 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Shield AI V-BAT

Hello, Lilykhinz. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Shield AI V-BAT, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:08, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]