User talk:Licabettus

Speedy deletion nomination of Self-Aware Computing

Hello Licabettus,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Self-Aware Computing for deletion, because it's too short to identify the subject of the article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

Fixer88 (talk) 15:05, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Self-Aware Computing (December 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Serial Number 54129 was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I have to decline this on the grounds that it reads against WP:NOTESSAY (particularly the "Examples" section, which with extra sourcing, might work better as a chunk of prose); equally damning at this point in time is its sourcing currently relies rather too heavilly on primary sourcing, which is only encouraged when backed by independent, third-party reliable surces. Good luck with this though, it deserves to be an article!

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>SerialNumber54129^{...speculates} 17:21, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Licabettus, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! >SerialNumber54129^{...speculates} 17:21, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Self-Aware Computing concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Self-Aware Computing, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:34, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Self-Aware Computing

Hello, Licabettus. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Self-Aware Computing".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 09:47, 30 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Self-Aware Computing (August 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Abelmoschus Esculentus was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

"In the medical context, we consider two examples, where self-awareness improves the classical implantology. Considering patients with cardiac arrhythmia, cardiac medical devices can be used to monitor patients permanently."

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~ Abelmoschus Esculentus (talk to me) 15:24, 13 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Self-Aware Computing (November 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Frayae was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still reads like an essay, missing a lead section, no cohesion, and relies heavily on examples while providing no clear overview or meta discussion.

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— Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 19:51, 4 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Self-Aware Computing (April 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

The proposed article does not have sufficient content to require an article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article at Autonomic computing. Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Self-aware computing already redirects to Autonomic computing. Please discuss there whether the topics should be split.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 23:50, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for pointing out the overlap with Autonomic computing. The vision of autonomic computing from 2003 can be seen as a predecessor for self-aware computing systems that have been defined over a decade later and has significantly evolved. The core differences are: Autonomic computing does not strictly integrate ongoing learning - in other words continuous self-improvement. In contrast to Autonomic computing, Self-aware computing systems are not strictly required to act - they can also suggest and explain to human users, as a form of a artificial intelligence engine. If self-aware computing would be merged with autonomic computing, this would make this evolution and core differences hard to communicate to the reader in a compact way.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Self-Aware Computing (August 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Scope creep were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Similar taxonomic branch as Autonomic computing, close but could have diverged 5 years possibly but notability isn't assured. The original diagram is has been deleted by commons for being a non-notable diagram. The article is written like an essay with sections are unsourced. The LRA-M Loop algo seems to be in several papers by the same person, in several groups, indicating it is the work of one person. The article really needs a large rewrite with the latest.

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scope_creep^Talk 21:10, 22 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Self-Aware Computing concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Self-Aware Computing, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:23, 23 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Self-Aware Computing

Hello, Licabettus. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Self-Aware Computing".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Lapablo (talk) 11:00, 23 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Self-Aware Computing

Hello, Licabettus. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Self-Aware Computing".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! —Nnadigoodluck🇳🇬 01:38, 16 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]