User talk:Lfz319/Repatriation and reburial of human remains
E9: Lydia's Plan to improve article
[edit]Minor Edits made: • Changed headings “Ethical considerations” to “Perspectives” • Added the heading “Case Studies” and altered other headings such as “Australia” and “Kennewick Man” to become subheadings. • Added the main article “Historical Trauma” page link.
Future Plans: Major Edits:
-Improve the "Perspectives" Section to include both emic community and scientists' perspectives involving repatriation
-Make Introduction more representative of the actual article
-Add equitable Case Studies such as Black American and African repatriation cases. Initial plan was to edit the section as a whole. However, I am now proposing to only add case studies, rather than thoroughly edit already existing cases.
Minor Edits:
-Change Headings
-Make Wiki links
-Add/improve equity in photographs
Lfz319 (talk) 23:09, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
WA3 Edits
[edit]· I deleted the entirety of Historical Trauma because the last two paragraphs either weren’t relevant or comprehensive on explaining historical trauma. I deleted the first paragraph because I checked the sources they used, and the original author misquoted the text.
· I wrote a small summary on Historical Trauma, using two new sources. I believe this paragraph gives information that is relevant to the article and the “Source Community Perspective” section. Readers can go to the main article “Historical Trauma” for more information.
· I wrote a brief summary of different perspectives involving repatriation.
· Then I elaborated on specific reasonings behind Descendant and Anthropologists’ perspectives.
· A total of 8 new sources were added to this Wikipedia article. Lfz319 (talk) 06:41, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
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I have added other Wikipedia page links to my page. They include:
· Archaeological ethics
· Yorta Yorta
· Botswana
· Historical Trauma
· Residential schools
· Pre-history
· Cranial modification
· Arthritis Lfz319 (talk) 07:02, 19 April 2023 (UTC)