User talk:Leonaaklipi
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[edit]Hello, Leonaaklipi, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:05, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Com 489 Introduction
[edit]Good Afternoon Leona! My name is Courtney and I am looking forward to Com 489 with you this quarter. I hope we become great friends! Cgooby (talk) 22:03, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
COM 489 Introduction
[edit]Hi Leona! My name is Olivia and I am in COM 489 with you! I'm super excited to see your edits on Cap Hill Block Party because its one of my favorite things about Seattle summer! Kingleothethird (talk) 05:26, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
Welcome!
[edit]Greetings Leonaaklipi and welcome (again!) to both Wikipedia and to COM482! I think that Capitol Hill Block Party is a great topic (sad to miss it this year), the stub had lots of room for improvement.
It looks like you're off to a good start and have added a bunch of text to the version in your sandbox. Keep working on it and compare it to other excellent articles on festivals. Watch issues of WP:TONE (you seem to be doing OK) and maybe also watch your use of WP:REDLINKS which you have a bunch of. Good luck! —mako๛ 15:42, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your draft
[edit]Greetings Leonaaklipi! I did a quick pass on your sandbox User:Leonaaklipi/Capitol Hill Block Party. You've added a ton of a new text, worked on the tone and it feels like it's on a good track. Why don't you start moving over the next to the live version of the article!
I'm sure we'll hear back from some local Wikipedians who will have additional insight and feedback on how to improve the article. —mako๛ 17:55, 4 November 2020 (UTC)