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Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department (March 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment they left was:

Frankly all of this is still questionable for an established notable article. Focus with adding any further available in-depth third-party news sources overall (news, magazines, journals, books, etc.).

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 06:13, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department (April 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tvx1 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The issues have not been resolved. Adding sources to the names in the list of doctors is not sufficient. In fact it's questionable where that section is needed the first place.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Detroit Health Department and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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T v x1 23:11, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Lawrencebimi, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! T v x1 23:11, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Detroit Health Department has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Detroit Health Department. Thanks! Worldbruce (talk) 18:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department has been accepted

Detroit Health Department, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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LaMona (talk) 21:50, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]